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Lover,
When our wings intertwined
and I fell into your music –
(It flowed like a trance and
dampened my skin with droplets, pianissimo) –
I could have lost myself
in your sonata storm
and let my chitinous scales wash away.

Lover,
I knew even then
those strings held you bound
in ways I never could.
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Themoonofmyheart Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's a nice rhythm in the poem :) when both lovers sing a song of their own, it holds a power that is closer to divine, a power that can make the people involved in it bind with each other :rose:
Qita
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QuiEstInLiteris Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you :)
I think it's a lot more common that people are out of synch, though. Tragedy.
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Marie-from-the-dust Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student Writer
Lovely flow~
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QuiEstInLiteris Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Professional Writer
:3 Thank you!
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SeventhFairy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very lovely and beautiful
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QuiEstInLiteris Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Professional Writer
<3 Thank you.
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh, lovely! :clap:
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QuiEstInLiteris Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Professional Writer
^^ Thanks!
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cLaIrEbY Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Gorgeous!
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QuiEstInLiteris Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you!
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cLaIrEbY Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
No probs! Just being honest :3
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
whoa! i really like the message and preview image (have to admit though, had to look up chitinous lol)
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QuiEstInLiteris Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Professional Writer
:3 Thanks!
(And I just really love that word. xD Not sure it really fits, but I WANTED to use it.)
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WalkinginDreamlight Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifully evocative poem :)

I love the way the image and poetry work well together.

Thank you for sharing!
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QuiEstInLiteris Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Professional Writer
That's what the #Lit-Visual-Alliance is all about. :) Drawing inspiration from work in other media.
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WalkinginDreamlight Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful composition between the two mediums - very well achieved :)

I think I did something like that last year (let me know what you think):

"Perfect Time"

Portraits
of lives
captured
in moments
of perfect
time

to the image: "Deniz L" - [link]
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