I remember you, quiet man,
plaidly relieved against a backdrop
spangled with motes of starry dust.
I remember you, blue eyes,
all black socks and white sweater,
and the way you used to eat mayonnaise.
I made fun of you for that.
I remember you smiling,
no tubes, no pumps.
And in the blue room, I played a game,
pretending I could keep you here
as long as I stayed awake, imagining
my breath sustaining you-
in and out
in and out
in and out
and once more.
But my heart cramps,
and my eyes are sore,
and this is not so much a poem
as a thinly veiled prayer
that you still guard me as I sleep,
though open eyes did not save you.
I'll leave that at that and I am very sorry for your loss...
Beautiful and very sweet, touching and emotional. I nearly cried, not a bad thing at all however, I've been repressing a lot and this really helped.
It's good to get your emotions out through words on paper isn't it?
And yes, it does help. Not much, but it does, and every little bit helps.
You're welcome
This is really beautiful beyond words, I don't know how to express how this has stopped me completely in my tracks and made me think, not only of that which I have lost but all that I still have and cherish. Thank you, really.
I'm also very sorry for your loss. This is a breathtaking poem.