First page! Awesome! With something like this you have to expect that some people will for the photo (which is amazing, by the way) but they're cheating themselves if they don't actually read your poem as well. The imagery in your poem actually manages to be even more vivid than the photo!
I really liked the picture. I liked that how from one angle it look like a moon in it shape, I liked how the flowers and the trees look as if they are drawn or stick into it. It is a really nice photo.
what attracted me was the pic, that yellow warm with glowing red SUN in the shadows which surrounds it, making also an ying-yang symbol, WICKED!!! ^^ & also nice lyrics ~by all, beautiful work, sweetie