The Texas autumn, breached,
pours forth cathartic drops,
an ecstasy of tears
to cleanse her dusty eyes of the agonizing fall.
The brow of Texas boils
in cloudy greys and thunder
amid coyote calls electric
down the city-slicker's spine
dropping low.
The breath of Texas chills -
a saw-blade through the heat -
and screams the cloud stampede
across the hills.
The voice of Texas condescends
to whisper in the huisatch
and whistle in the Spanish daggers
sparring with the mockingbird
to sing before she roars.
The mercy of Texas
is no relief -
this wild trickster goddess burns
then drowns.
Thank you!
I like it.
Sometimes the burning heat seems like a living killing machine, the only thing to save me from insanity in every way it's the long expected rain
The breath of Texas chills -
a saw-blade through the heat -
and screams the cloud stampede
across the hills.
make by itself a poem on it's own
skfmslakfns I LOVE "city-slicker" god. I am so jealous. Ever since I started playing the video game Oblivion I wanted to use that phrase but I could never really fit it anywhere so it remains in my not used pile of vocabulary
I don' t really have any constructive feedback on this piece, I really like it as is!
And I do try not to overuse my favourite words, but sometimes nothing else will do.